Pour out the white sand
and climb up real high.
This time bring me joy,
not bullshit and lies.
You still bring that buzz,
like you did before,
but its not quite enough
and I always need more
Not quite sure I like what you do to my brain
You're kind of a guilty pleasure, cocaine.
Author notes
Used prompt 2 "pollen of thousand lies", but with a bit of creative mindwork it could probably fit most of the prompts;
- baconpeacecoffeedrugssexpoetrymusic lo group list • next in list
A contest entry
- PIF Yep, number two by Riftkin.
625 points, ended May 22, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a great poem about the up side of cocaine use, I personally don't like it, but the way you make it sound, I might be up for trying it agian!
But probably not though, still a great poem!!! lol
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a well written poem with a great twist at the end of it.
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this is wonderful. thank you for entering. best of luck to you, in this contest of mine... Riftkin
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