Lascivious temptations
construct distorted contemplations,
then deliverance is desecrated
with conventional terminations
now morally corrupted
is the balance of creation~
Author notes
Picture is the prompt
Pic Credit: rites4life@photobucket.com
20 words exactly
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A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt 20 Words Exactly by poppa.
1650 points, ended May 13, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a strong phrases - distorted contemplations, desecrated deliverance, conventional terminations leading to a moral corruption - for a powerful write.
Congratulations on the gold!
Marlene -
Hmmm... Very nicely said. Very eerie picture - It really scared me at first... But you really said some powerful words. Wonderful poem.
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Wow. This was amazing. Abortion is something that shouldn't happen, there are better ways. Great write.
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