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Silent Screams




Lascivious temptations
construct distorted contemplations,
then deliverance is desecrated
with conventional terminations

now morally corrupted
is the balance of creation~

 

 

 

 

 

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Pic Credit: rites4life@photobucket.com
20 words exactly

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    Such a strong phrases - distorted contemplations, desecrated deliverance, conventional terminations leading to a moral corruption - for a powerful write.
    Congratulations on the gold!
    Marlene


  • Perception
    May 10, 2008

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    Hmmm... Very nicely said. Very eerie picture - It really scared me at first... But you really said some powerful words. Wonderful poem.


  • UrbaN PlaguE
    May 10, 2008

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    Wow. This was amazing. Abortion is something that shouldn't happen, there are better ways. Great write.