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music

listen the the horns
and trumpets makeing all that noise,
some music is real soft
but some music just has no poise,
listen to the serine sound of a chirping turtle dove,
all that you need to know of now is music is the sound of love

                                                                  - kevin251

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2nd poem woo

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  • Theory Of The Lost
    June 20, 2008
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    Well written before i start can you put what part of my family you would like to be in please and thanks! OK back to the poem this was short and sweet but very strong, it had a nice flow to it. very well worded..Very well written good luck in the contest!


  • The Girl In ME
    May 10, 2008
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    I love it i miss you in the ap room