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Now To Play


O ! Drastic cad, thou !
Mark my words now
This ain't a cow.

Words in a row
That try to crow
This hurts (Oh no !).

With "much" to say
And now to play
`tis my try (okay ?).

Author notes

Oy ! It proved to be a bit more than I could wrap my tiny brain around. But I enjoyed trying.

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  • Nephalaneous lover
    May 21, 2008

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    awsome, i enjoyed this muchly, lol, great write, good luck in the contest

    NL


  • myrataal silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    Fun write ...

    yes ... it hurts to play ... sometimes.



    But you tried ... and it was fun, eh?

    Myra


  • islekine gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    tougher than it looks!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • Elfin
    May 11, 2008
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    This indeed is not an easy contest, so well done and good luck. Val