Save me some way some how
I did all i could to drain
The memories of then and now
Let the blood wash them away
Fill my mind
With the last few words
Left in your heart for you to find
To tell of how we once were
Take away this pain
Show me you can
Take all this rain
Are you that man
In shades of red
On this fabric you sew
Here next to my death bed
A bloody rainbow
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to Raymond Wilfong Jr. aka Kata Amaru
A contest entry
- promt/ rainbows and blood by tainfinite.
800 points, ended May 24, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything-prewrites allowed-2nd contest by Midgetbridgey.
350 points, ended July 11, 2008, 245 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh wow
Bloody rainbow indeed.
This is very well written goes so deep
Thank you and good luck
Cindy
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