My body shakes to a cold and empty world i bleed my last drop,
my heart is pounding so fast I can't even hear it but still i can feel it,
I went to open my mouth to scream,
For anyones help,
But no sound, only blood pouring out in front of me,
Tears touch my cheeks,
Leaving red stains.
Before my heart gave in,
Everything went dark, but I still see red.
2 bloody?
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I wouldn't say too bloody. you actually only say the word blood once in the poem, just hint at it. so well done.
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