There once lived five incredible men
Many kids were glorified by the greatness of them
They made phenomenal music through blood and knives
Without knowing they would be saving many other lives.
The fans scream so loud that you'll never forget
The tale of a patient, his fears and regret
Oh all the poison the band once had
Will destroy and make a good story go bad.
Locked in a house with your troubles and skill
It felt like 'The Black Parade' was trying to kill
But if you sing about terrors you've tried to resist
You'll discover beauty never known to exist.
Run for that stage and put on a show
The things that I've heard, you don't want to know
Dangerous is what we are combined together
My Chemical Romance saved my life, and made it forever.
Please tell me what you think
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oh my god can i relate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
especially "if you sing about terrors you've tried to resist, you'll discover beauty never known to exist"
mcr is so much more than what they seem at first glance (or listen, rather,lol). they saved me, i can't even explain, but i guess you know what i mean
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amazing write!!!!!!! *bookmarks*.
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Love the rhyme set up Newy
Super write. Me luvs u!!!!!
~Oka/KC
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I know what you mean!! They saved mine in a time of depression and suicidal thoughts
but I'm glad they came to be. This must most definitely be the completely best poem I have ever laid my eyes upon on this god forsaken earth! No lie either I don't have a favorite part or anything, the entire thng is a must keep, you couldn't have written this any better, and I don't lie about things as important as this. It must have come from a deep place in your soul, and it sure sounds like it. If I could give you more "clappies" I would, but 3 will have to suffice for now.
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this is really good good write
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hehe... Nice poem, in dedication to a.... Band.
Though I thought your word play was a bit weird (the syntax of your words) it was ok for the most part.
Nicely done 
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