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Hive

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
A single Queen Bee, among millions.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Prompt:
Six words.

Think about it

and
Enjoy ~

A contest entry

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  • paperbackwriter
    May 22, 2008
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    i really reallly love this poem it captures that emotions that i believe many people feel


  • blackday
    May 11, 2008

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    The metaphor in this one was good for a quickie. & maybe it's me, but the hexagon of the comb is also a good tie in.


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 10, 2008
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    You can even hear this one.
    Congratulations on the silver.
    Marlene


  • chugglepuff
    May 10, 2008

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    An original thought, and very good use of your few words Congratulations on the silver!


  • Childsight
    May 10, 2008
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    Cool write! Congrats on silver!


  • Ithica silver member
    May 10, 2008

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    YES! This appeals to my current "single" status! [in a hopeful way, hehe!] So many stingers... And not enough time!!! Woo-Hoo!!! Thank-you for entering!

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