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The Act Of Thought

A
first
spark
sets the
flame.
L
e
t
it grow to
light the
way to go.
From small
great things
come to life.
Feed with air
oxygen pure
nurture the
fire inside.
The candle of
creation burns
from within.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    This is a wondrous work! To see the colors of the match..and the words to go with it..It creates such hope...


  • Blood Bloom
    May 27, 2008
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    Awesome!!

    Great poem. Loved it! Oh, and welcome to allpoetry!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    I loved this one

    You have done very well with this and its very unique in style .


  • Ink4Blood
    May 11, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry.com!

    Well now, this is such a wonderful work of art. I envy those who can do forms such as like what you have done here. I can't wait to read more of your work.

    If you need any help around the site, feel free to IM me.

    -Justin
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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    May 10, 2008
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    I loved this the moment I saw it, well done.


  • Mirthryl
    May 10, 2008
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    Outstanding and very perceptive thoughts, beautifully set forth. Excellent work!

  • EncounteredEpiphany
    May 10, 2008
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    BRAVO

    This was very spiritual with few words but very powerful!!! LO-AMO SALUTE!!!!!


  • frownsnfreckles
    May 10, 2008
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    I do like shape poems. This one is well formed and alight with wise words.


  • FifthDove
    May 10, 2008

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    How wonderful
    Love the alias name as well


  • Corvus Corone
    May 10, 2008

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    Sealed Hope you like Stevie.

     

    Thank you so much

     

    Mama Jemmy 

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