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The Best of Jazz

He hit the downbeat, found the blues,

Not to mention having no clues.

The jazz man could improvise and drag,

'Bad Penny Blues' an infamous rag.

 

Slurring between riffs with such ease,

Trumpet proud he stood out from the sleaze.

Vamp chords repeated for our delight,

dissonance of students in bars each night.

 

Jazz club hero Humph always will be,

Jam sessions when all tried to follow thee. 

And though no fun for your vetting,

His music alone was knicker wetting! 

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    May 12, 2008
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    Somehow your quirky meter fits a jazzman! You do need to get hold of some recordings of "I'm sorry I haven't a clue" because his sense of humour will match you to perfection. He was a man in a million.


  • The Poetic Angel
    May 12, 2008
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    nice tribute Jems m'Lady



    xxx Your angel xxx


    • Corvus Corone
      May 12, 2008
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      Thank you My angel

      Guess I will have time to write next couple if the muse is up for it.

      Love you

      YLD

      xxx Jem xxx

  • KayJay
    May 11, 2008

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    Simply Fab!

    Warm, rich, and with just the right amount of humor. You and your subject are in harmony!
    Well done...
    K


  • Perception
    May 10, 2008

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    Oh! Nice poem! I really love how you used your words, it really helped what you were talking about... Hmmm... This is good hehe
    Good luck in your contest -- this is really good

  • craftyangel43
    May 10, 2008

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    Oh Ms Jem this was great. I love jazz music especially the trumpet players (i used to play the trumpet myself). There is nothing any sweeter than listening to a great trumpet player. A very good write and good luck in the contest MsJem.
    Hugs,
    Cheryl


    • Corvus Corone
      May 10, 2008
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      Than you Cheryl. I glad you enjoyed my poetic jazz. I used to play sax in my uni jazz band. Think we murdered a fair few wonderful tunes.
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