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Amber

She sits there silently all alone
No one near her, she has out grown.

As she walks by they stop and stare but she brushes it off like they arent there.

Beautiful colors follow behind while she walks in a world of her own.

Imagination, unknown, beauty, color, snow.
Imagination gone wild, crazy, mysterious.
Unknown to those around, they dont understand bc she is different.
Beauty is what she holds from the inside to the out, no one can hold it, she is free.
Color so random of life, she withers from afar then outgrows in strife.
Snow in which she sleeps, locked away from all, but tried to show with her way to glow.

Amber....the name and curse she bares but no one cares, they see beauty in lost eyes.

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  • queen Moderators member
    May 29, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi BertBrutal,

    Being different is hard sometimes but i think truely strong people are different. Not afraid to do their own thing

    Good poem, please keep writing, reading and commenting

    Barbara
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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    May 15, 2008

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    A wonderful way to write bout a rainbow etc..Quite enjoyed the descriptions

    Thank you and good luck
    Cindy


  • youholdmyheartskey
    May 11, 2008
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    hey

    You've captured her perfectly Bert!!