Stolen kisses and surreal romance
A high from your embrace and breathless from our last dance
Escape from your hold if only for a moment to regain reality
Dreams realized and passions collide
Our destinies, tonight, coincide
With these few days for happiness to sway
I’ll hold this night captive to the day
When you abandon my side, and I betray my trust
The night when fixation turns to lust
Author notes
I'm first forgotten!
A contest entry
- What Is Love? **NEW Options Added** by goodbye account.
1000 points, ended May 30, 2008, 9 entries
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I did enjoy the dire warning at the end, to betray you or anyone for that matter always has consequences. I hope love is always near and true to your heart
C
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love it great write it was truly amazing keep it up.
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This is really powerful.
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Great ending
A wonderful poem that is well written
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love and lust
these twoo are very close to each other and relationships can and do go both ways, this indeed shows your romantic side, as well it shows your other side that will get by and go on and on like nothing ever happened,, I enjoyed the passion that you provide with your images within this poem,,very very well done sweetie,,,blessings of love,life,laughter and light...Firestorm
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bravo
Ouch! A very torrid piece of passionate and purple poetry, indeed! Most deftly and adroitly done here! bravo... bravo... bravo...
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amazing! this is a stunning piece! >.< i love this piece, ur words, metaphors and imagery! you used such beautiful words that painted gorgeous pictures in mind! >.< brilliant job!
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sweet!
I love this! Great imagery and wording! it flows perfectly and i love the idea! Great write!
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