A black mahogany box,
red velvet lined
once held treasures
of a boy adventurer
dreaming about
the mysteries of life.
Author notes
As a boy growing up in a lower middle class family, I did not have much in the way of toys so I used my imagination a lot. I actually had a black mahogany box that I called my treasure chest, which contained all of the remarkable items a little boy could happily collect.
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I loved this. Having a little boy, I see the treasures of a catseye marble, an empty glass yoohoo bottle, and gumball machine trinkets that mean the world to him. I am aware I am watching memories in the making, and thank you for taking me down the lane.
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Short, but good. Great statements. Bravo!
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I never knew what beauty could be found in 20 words.
This tiny little piece made me think back to the many "treasure" chests I have filled over my years...your authors notes are very relatable to me...I didnt have alot, but what I did have I treasured (and still do) ......how the heck did you manage to make me go all sentimental with 20 words?? Great job!
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Thank you so much for entering, Michael. Love, Lane
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Aww that's so sweet! I love your ANs too... not having many toys myself growing up I used my imagination a lot also!
Love this MJ!
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Excellent Poem
Truly inspiring...Imagination, and Hope, matters a lot when we are left with nothing real to play with. This has in fact taken me back to my childhood years as well. I used to have some imaginary companions too, like many children who love their moments of solitude...Congrats and Best Regards.
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The can visualize a little boy going through his treasure chest, deciding where he wanted his mind to wander for a few hours. Love Juls
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awwww, this is awesome
lovely descriptions and all
keep it up daddy
take care
stephanie
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Did your treasure include a toy gun (imagined/designed by you)as well? Just curious....lol
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this is very moving..
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As an adult I'm sure you still keep the things that are remarkable and precious to you dear.
My best wishes to you in the contest.
Always
Margaret
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