One With the Sea
a moment in time,
soul reaches the sun
silent mantra;
serenity melds
meditation mends
moments of stress;
listen; hear,
messages from
immortal sea songs
faceless form,
eastern eternal dawn
draws strength
from oneness...
ohm
Author notes
PIF "Will Power"
A contest entry
- PIF.......Unsigned....... by unsigned.
450 points, ended May 13, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very serene writ where ones trinity dissolves into the elements. Floating in mist above churn of sea.. kissing crags then releasing embrace.. rolling in foam. Kelp wrap around embodiment... like a wedding dress. A bride in Poseidon's arms... becoming greatest of treasures,, the Queen of the sea. an enjoyable release. Congrats on a well deserved gold
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maa (Marion Mantel) told me that I am of the lost continent of Lemuria. She made me a healing lemuria crystal. At one time I wanted to be a marine biologist. My parents would not let me leave my city to go to college. As a teen, we had a home by the Jersey shore, and early in the mornings I would go to the pier, where the dolphins swam, and swim with them. They intrinsically know a friend. Thank you for your poetic comment.
Linda
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Such a moment you describe. "soul reaches the sun" wow, melding, mending, messages, oneness - ohm. Very nice write.
Congratulations on the gold.
Marlene -
beautiful~
This is beautiful sis...
So very peaceful and calming...
I really enjoyed reading about the meditation and mantra..
Love you and this too
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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You captured the moment so well with you words of serenity, so attune with the elements...
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you caught the moment wonderfully...
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Brilliant. You catch the aura of the moment perfectly. "silent mantra" Just beautiful. And with your little touches of alliteration this piece reads VERY well
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Beautiful Shana
You took me into her world, her thoughts and feelings.
Wonderful imagery
Much love sis xx
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This is beautiful!! Such a peaceful feel to it - and says so much about mantra's and meditations. I love this!!!
best wishes in your contest.
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truly a verse of serenity and grace ...
your words are blessings to all who read them ...
resonating with the divine within all ...
thank you so much, dearest sister,
om
maa
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