i'm living in a life
of all work no play
no fun
no more happy times
no more true true smiles
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I'm sure we've all been there, hardwire. It's tough trying to conform to society, when all you want is difference in your life. It's not easy to make 5 lines speak so loudly, yet you have captured so many voices in so little words. you did perfect justice to the youth all around the world!
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Relaxation is the key. {Yet, who am I to talk? When I find is so hard to relax myself}. You have described myself here. A very sad poem indeed. Well-written.
Well done my friend.
Love
Wayne Leon
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Aw... That sucks. You need some play. You need to go out PARRRRRT-ahy!!!! hehehe... Anyways. That sucks... And this is a sad poem.. saying so.
Best of luck
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