Falling, no rising
Naked, no free
Dancing on a thread of life
While the world yet falls below me
Gathered in natures arms
Sweet caressing...
Sweet caressing
My sweetest desire
A contest entry
- Pretty Pic Prompt (PIF).... semi-quickie by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 12, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How nice it would be to be free like that! A very lovely write for the picture! Thank you
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a good piece of poetry, i just had a look at the picture then, i hope i dream of her later falling to me.
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nice..I like this it moves on its own...has a life me thinks
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taiinfinite
thankyou for your comment glad you enjoyed the read
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