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Flying Cloud Lament

 

 

Flying Cloud, sails
south round the Cape
no tourists aboard this time out
not many slaves
no clanking of shackles
only the smell and hope
chained by the ankle

Bananas and coffee
piled high down below
the blue sky, the topmasts
sailors all dancing
high on the weedsmoke
rolling out from the shore

Jasper Springs where we landed
fresh as prawns from the sea
jumbled green timber
(a prospectors haven)
whores, dice and whisky
nooses hanging from trees

First night a calamity
shot out of sleep
we watched the deceased
fall like leaves in a breeze

Bullets are gone
our tattoo's are peeling
the crew wishes all mighty
fool's gold was as pretty
as a sunrise at sea

Cold winter is howling
we're down to the marrow
we horde the last virtues
to heat our lost souls
                 on the way to Perdition
Pity the sailors so far from the sea

 

 

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Author notes

Flying Cloud was a crack clipper ship that made the trip around the horn to California many times. As far as I know she never carried slaves, that was my own ivention.

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  • Redstormy gold member
    May 13, 2008
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    I do love your historical writes David. I wish somehow you could meet a good friend of mine who loves history as much as you do. Her name is Marcia, a young lesbian
    who is as elusive as our spring seems to me in Minnesota. Great write as usual!

    Red


  • Cup-a-Joe
    May 11, 2008
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    Excellent Job

    David,
    Excellent use of poetic leaway.
    I enjoyed this trip asail.
    Joe



  • celadia
    May 10, 2008

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    I like story poems and I thought this was quite a good one. It's nice to read about something I don't know about and that is sailing.


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    When I started reading this I thought you were sailing south towards Cape Town - the Cape of Storms, lolol. I really got the sailor-feel from this one... yes, the dry land isn't their home. Nicely done, David.

    ~ Nicolette


  • WolfHeart
    May 10, 2008

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    Great stuff! I am sure there were plenty of other ships that carried slaves.
    You always take me to adventures and wonder.

    Wolfie


  • Perception
    May 10, 2008

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    Oh. I like this write. Very descriptive, and you put me in the moment. Great job on this one... I really like what you have penned here... Seems passionate hehe
    Nice write

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