Yellow the color of the suns rays' yellow full of thoughts of happy days' yellow flowers in the spring.
Yellow the color that makes the humming birds sings yellow is all over our beautiful world its not rare so jump into the color yellow if you dare'
Author notes
I hope you like this I feel I captured yellow well
A contest entry
- The colors of our world by PonyPride.
900 points, ended May 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think of the color yellow
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okay, yes it follows the rules. But,I am not very fond of this style and I see a absense of flow. Perhpas change it around and it could really be something. I dont think your not talented and I thank you for following the rules, but the reasons stated firstly explain my decision to stray from placing your poem in the finalists. Best of luck and you have my appoligizes
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??is this really a poem.. not my style
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it's nice
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