You asked why
Why I cried
In front of you
When we met again
Cause I'm not fine
I'm so lost
I feel hollow
Whats left of me
Is your glowing face
In my lonely mind
Im tired pretending
To feel this empty emotions
To feel happy
But deep inside feeling empty
Pretending to smile
But carrying the weight of a sad face
Truth is im really miserable
I feel as nothing is worth it
Only but
You
Nothing, nothing important anymore
My memory of you, of us is all I've got
Your picture
Is the only treasure
That I beat for
It's you thats all I've got
Am I this blind
To love someone like you
Someone thats tearing me apart
But someone I dearly
Miss
When you said
The most daring words of
Goodbye
Infront of my face
I didn't moved
I didn't even blink
I got lost
And you just walked away
Cause you thought it would be
Okay
You thought I wound find another
But dont you realized
I only long for
You
As days pass
Pieces of me fell
My life started to crack
Everything felt like
It trembled, crumbled
You were the pillar
That was holding everything of
Me
So I cried
I cried out my lungs
Cried out reading you poetry
Cried out for wanting you back
Because simply
Ironically simply
Though you have hurt me
I still want you back
Cause its you thats
All I've got
Author notes
well everything here is true to life, what i wrote here is what i really really felt when she damn left me, i got over it in about a year, killing myself out of it, but oh well her memory was fun, crying was fun, embarassly reading my poems to her was fun, when i think about it now when time has pass, but the scars still do hurt though, enjoy, i hope this is what your looking for,
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Comments
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this is sad
but atleast it has closure
there is this goodbye
so you're not left hanging into nothingness
and i love the background
hope everything's okay now
i don't know if time could ease pain
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this is so true to one of my past relationships. it seems sometimes no matter how much pain someone putts you through you always want them back.
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this is a very beautiful and emotional poem! i am so sorry that you hurt like this! amazing poem! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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This was so sad, and I can honestly see myself doing something like this, being a person who would do what you have described. My only issue would be to go back and check your grammar and spelling on some words, it'll highten the piece I assure you. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for entering
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awww... hehe tuo nko ako... waaaaaaa
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this is so beautiful.
i'm glad you entered this,
because this was truly
what i was looking for.
and i hope you can heal dear,
i know i did.
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awwh this is so sad so very very sad am sorry she left you feeling this way I know how that feels it truely hurts no fun losing somone very close so much emotion in this piece I love this so much I been there ..so many times ...the memories still do hurt of course cause it a memory that you will never forget but move on :]
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