Subtle shadows crowd the visions
Breaking down, breaking down
Everything that could be right
It all has hit the ground
Wandering alone for what seems like forever
A phantom's whisper in a world so cold
Light seldom breaks through the viel of clouds
In a world so cold
Missing moments framed in tears
Lost from me, lost from me
All these things that I can't find
This darkess will not let me see
Wandering alone for what seems like forever
A phantom's whisper in a world so cold
Light seldom breaks through the vie of clouds
In a world so cold
But finally, a light breaks through
So unknown, so unknown
Such an unexpected surprise
So now you know you aren't alone
Finally, the light came through to you
The phantom's whisperin a world so cold
So now you kno you aren't alone
In a world so cold
In a world so cold
Author notes
It may seem kinda sad, and the first 2/3 of it are supposed to be, but the last 1/3 of the poem are supposed to be hopeful.
Also, I entered one of your other contests & said I would have liked to been your AP bro. I think you may have forgotten, though.
A contest entry
- A fresh start for my world of poetry by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended June 10, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I would love to have you as my ap brother and the power in this piece is unique with thought and meaning and I love it well done
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