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Torn from the Womb

Icy cold surrounds me as I await the surgeons knife
Thoughts swirling round and round my head
I am taking someones life
I know the decision was mine, but am I sure?
Yet these doubts prevail,
Knowing the heartache I will endure
This growing cell inside me will soon be snatched away
Dear God help me, to survive this very day
And forgive me if I hurt you by taking away this life
But sometimes wrong decisions
Will only end up in strife

Author notes

Many young women after to make a decision about abortion. Sadly some make the wrong decision.
I see the picture as a wonderful ovum and the hand
of fate snatching it away.

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  • Zoe2007
    May 11, 2008

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    Interesting ....thanks for the making it clear to me . i must say it is a bit confusing but as i am away it still sends a good message