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Consciousness

Blindly conceive what eyes merely see
Hear the impressions hands feel
Taste the fragrance wafting on air
All was nothing until it became real

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Prompt is: "looking beyond into the dream of reality"
20-30 words

BLIND Contest: Please do not use my name.

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  • Grey Mouser
    May 15, 2008

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    Wonderfully written, all things imagined hold places in reality, until they become realised. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!!!!

    One dreams and cherishes their dreams but when they become truly real a deep and lasting happiness has come to their hearts. 's