S a w w w i i i i i i s s s s h h h h . . .
Careful, keep your balance
Don't want to look stupid
so make it seem you have talent. . .
S h h w w i i i i p p p . . .
Whups, youre down again
Maybe lie there a while and rest
Well i think it's time to get up, but then. . .
S H I I I N K K . . .
Whoa there, you almost hit that guy!
'I'm so sorry!' you yell
He doesn't care, so give it another try. . .
. . . s w i s s h h .
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w
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. . .h h s s o o w s. . . p
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p . . . s h i i i i .
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On your way down now
you're actually staying up!
wow, you've learned it, somehow. . .
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Written December 19th, 2003
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hehe yay you learned it
keep trying hehe. ive never been snowboarding..been skiing though..and it sorta fits to that too - but snowboarding supposed to be harder...so yeah anyway, take care Ash, gbu thanks for commenting on my poem
simeon -
Great picture with the poem...People probably wouldn't want to hear about it if I was learning to snowboard though...THUMP...THUMP. All there would be is my body slamming into the snow each time I fell. Glad you have better luck.
Matt -
Ive never been snowboarding either. I would probably S M A C K ! !
into a tree. lol. I liked your poem though, and your words really enhanced the snowboarding experience. -
i have never been snowboarding or surfing lol um, it's a cool write though, i want to go snowboarding!
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LOL.. I remember you tellin me about this
I like how you did that with all the letters in there. It made it all...coollike my poem would be like "whoops, slipped on the snow, fell off a cliff, and died!" so it wouldn't be as long.... but it would be funny still lol. Great write here, Ash, GLAD TO SEE YOU'RE DOING MORE THAN SPIRITUAL!! 
What a snowboarderific write!!! Great job and God bless- saab 
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