Such a sweet and delicate fruit
Hanging from the vines of heaven
Others try to obtain her
But she is unreachable by any means
Butterflies fluttering around for company
She dances on air like a ballerina
Life, simple and pure
Author notes
Credit Artist: In our dreams by Dezzan
In a list
A contest entry
- Pretty Pic Prompt (PIF).... semi-quickie by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 12, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow this is really good and a great take on the pic prompt. yay
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Aww that's sweet! She does seem unreachable yet so engaging that you want to reach for her...
Thank you for entering
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this is really good. beautiful, absolutely beautiful. i love your take on this, it's amazing. keep it up
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LOST FOR WORDS!
What more do I need to say? U know I love ya and I LOVE this poem one my favorite.
Love Tabby
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Oh. How beautiful. I love your take on the picture -- your ideas are so... genuine and beautiful
Great job, and good luck in your contest
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well written..the best I have read of yours..
Unsigned
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prettyness oooooh
very different
shes like heavens virgin
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This is VERY good!! Well Done
You just keep coming and coming with such amazing pieces... you have some great talent here keep em'comin -
i love it. it is really good. although your title is alittle cliche. but its still awsome with great wording. good luck
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