I float adrift serenity
suspended in blissful peace
my mind
weightless and free
my soul dances
as graceful as a ballerina
as softly as the delicate flutter of butterflies
to the sweet harmonic melody
of my contented state of mind
Author notes
Artist: In our dreams by Dezzan
http://dezzan.deviantart.com/art/In-our-dreams-84520798
In a list
A contest entry
- Pretty Pic Prompt (PIF).... semi-quickie by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 12, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contentment by z etoile.
300 points, ended July 15, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem, ah my mind is never content, it just keeps running on and on and on and on and yeah i was dancing across the room and this ballerina stopped me and gave me head...lights appraoched and i thought where the flip am i
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lmao my my, some dream you musta been having lol And you say your mind is never content?
Sounds like it should be 
ohhh it isn't your 'mind' you're talking about is it LOL
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This is just lovely!
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Thank you so much.
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oooo I liked this one it is like you were fluttering along through the entire piece. Great job and thank you for entering the contest.
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm happy you enjoyed the read.
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oooo I liked this one it is like you were fluttering along through the entire piece. Great job and thank you for entering the contest.
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Ahhhh tried to sneak your gold past me... not happening (LOL). Wonderful write full of delicacy... and well deserving of the Gold! Congratulations!
Ken
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Can't get a thing by you can I? Lol Thank you my dear sweet friend.
Linda
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Beautiful serenity
Delicate are your wonderful words that dance in my mind
Congratulations on the Gold
Well deserved hun
Julie
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My thanks to you dear lady, I hope you enter your beautiful words in my pif hehe
Linda
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Oh to be suspended in blissful peace..
This has such a beautiful feeling to it.. a contented state of mind does indeed bring that peace.
Thank you for the entry
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Wow I'm happily shocked, thank you for Gold sweet lady. I will pif pronto. And yep, being suspended in blissful peace is my dream as well
Linda
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Beautiful Sis ....
Wonderful
Simon
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Well thank you bro
Linda
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Sounds light and airy. Best wishes with the contest.
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Thanks Chucky, much appreciated. Hope you are well and happy..hope to catch up soon.
Linda
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