Being with someone you like , forms a strong bond over time
Grants you unforgettable experiences, memories that will be with you always
You fall in love and want only her, giving her your heart to do as she pleases
She sleeps with others, your heart breaking and trust begins to vanish
Crying she apologizes, you accept believing it was truly accidental
Your love for her is stronger than any mistake she makes
You promised your heart to her even if she causes you extreme suffering
Shortly after it happens she does it again and again and.......again!
Crying not wanting to lose someone as great as you, she apologizes
You give in only because you truly love her and it saddens you to see her in pain
Author notes
"How many times will I go and take the bait, Only for this hook to rip right through my face"
Flyleaf - Sleepwalker & Whispering fingertips.
Also since this is in the category My Life and Personal it means this exactly happened to me. lol Personal experience sux hardcore!!! =*(
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie! by LeilaJayne.
300 points, ended May 10, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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Perpetual self torment stinks. Love is crazy.
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giving that forgiveness is the key to any lasting relationship. sometimes easier said than done but worth it in the end. you wrote this very well and i thank you for sharing it with me tonight. looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Wow, this sucks. I really loved the image though. It's how I feel sometimes. I have a tendency to pull away from people so I don't get hurt. Anyway, awesome write.
♥
Sam
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Beautiful
I like how you were honest with your feelings. I'm sorry that you went through that. Well written.
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take ur heart back
she is not giving u hers... so whats the point...
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I honestly hate people like the girl you described... If she really didnt want to lose you, and thought you where great, she wouldnt be sleeping around because she'd see the real treasure she already had......
Great poem! I know this feeling well, though, because I've been in a similar situation, and it sucks... I'm just glad I finally learned to walk away
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Awww turn the frown upside down Be happy lol. The poem was great, very real. Nice work.
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this was really good. people who bait someone like that and hurt them that way are horrible. i'm sorry you had something like that happen to you i hope you never get hurt like that again. a great poem though, keep it up
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BEEN THERE DONE THAT
Almost everyone I date either breaks up with me cuz I wont give 'em none. Or cheates on me
Yet I have always taken it and even now when I'm not dating I'm still taken.
I'm sorry if that ever happend to u hun
Love Tabby
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Forgot! sorry..
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Awww.. This was really painful!!
You did a wonderful job with the prompt hun!! I really liked this!
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Wow, this is really good. I hate that kind of bait.x-x no one needs to be treated like that or have somthing like that done to them.
Great write.
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love this!
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hmm this is rather philosical. but great write, nice look at the prompt and good luck in the contest
take care
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lots and lots of pain....Well done young poet...
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