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Swan

                                   sail
                            across the 
                        water blue,  no
                                 splash,
                               glide
                              as if
                            on ice,
                           sun
                         shines
                        upon    the water reflecting hope
                      our       laughter echoes the songs of nature,
                       watch     feathers ruffled, cries of joy
                         being part of the scenery, picture
                          of happiness and youth, enjoying
                           the riverbank adorned by summer.
 children eagerly watching the rowing boats compete with the swans,
                            oars... wings dipped into the water.
                           these regal creatures disturbed not
                          by the closeness of our voices, chunks
                         of bread    cause ripples a flurry of feathers,
                       diving        beaks beneath the water line,
                        tasting     sharing the picnic prepared for us,
                           crusts 
                            we don't
                              have to eat
                                today
                                  a treat
                                    shared
                         with the birds and

                               summertime

                                        fun.

                            

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I hope this works lol

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  • eoz
    May 17, 2008
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    this is beautiful


  • Painting My Words
    May 13, 2008
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    Thank you for making this for me, I like birds.

    Stevie


  • islekine gold member
    May 11, 2008
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    This is lovely!

    Words and shape! Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*

  • tara wilson gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    that has very beautiful imagery...perfect for the shape..or the shape is perfect for the poem..lol
    best of luck in the contest


  • aliceramone
    May 10, 2008

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    this is excellent...love the imagery especially "water reflecting hope"...the lines are so cool...I love this.


  • Corvus Corone
    May 10, 2008

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    Oh this is beautiful,and I know Stevie will love this so very much. Thank you for sharing and good luck

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