Brain and heart foggy with unsureness
Sitting, ready to accept death from the Reaper
Unable to understand, life's more than just pain and suffering
Can I change my own fate?
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Option1.Credit please! Princess_Of_Shadows_by_ArhcamtIlnaad
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this is very good. creepy, emotional, and with beautiful writing and imagery. a great piece, keep them coming
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very goodness
creepy and emotional jus the way i like it
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Excellent take on the prompt, i sometimes wonder if i can change my fate myself, or whether its already marked out for me and im just living up to it. Wonderful write, such good imagery. I love it =] x
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Nicely done. You wrote an amazing short dark one. It's great. Go you! ^-^
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Wonderful dark
She sits waiting yet can she change her fate that lies in the hands of the reaper..
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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This was really good hun.. I love this take on the prompt.. It's like in the end theres this hope!! great write!! I really did like this!!
best of luck!!
Angel
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