Tears on my tears,
For many years,
I have cried for everything lost,
I have cried for winter frost.
Tears on my tears,
And burning fears,
I have mourned for unjust blames,
I have mourned for dying flames,
Tears on my tears,
Iresistible leers,
I have wanted flowers to die and wither,
And for a dried up mighty river,
Tears on my tears,
Running of graceful deers,
I have tried to break protective locks,
And smashed the sturdy rocks,
Tears on my tears,
As destructive winds come near,
I have caught the flying birds,
And said that winds should destroy but not be heard,
As elements collide,
I wish to go on and hide with those I love,
But I decide to stay and fight,
I got hit and saw the spinning light,
But in my world I am still there,
Not here,
I visit them but they cannot see me,
I just wish to be set free,
I am to them invisible,
I can become visible,
But I am scared,
So I run like a frightend mare,
It is not fair.
Author notes
saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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Comments
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This was a really good poem,
You expressed a lot of emotion ,
and created a very vivid image,
I'm sorry that you were said when you wrote this
I hope that things have gotten better for you though..
Best of luck with the contest..
Angel
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nice
ur good at writing poem!
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fear is always sad, I find it to be just a lie, your write is heartbreaking but you do have a gift with the pen. sometimes if you fill your thoughts with things you love with joyful things even if you have to use your imagination it could help rid you of the fear but we all at one time in our lifes have been here so know your not alone. God bless
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good job
I'm sorry you feel sad but let me tell you something. Nothing in life gets better unless we make it get better. Crying when you're sad is good and it's also healthy. But still, you can't sit around and hope for things to change on their own. We need to get out in the world and strive for better days by finding good things to do for ourselves, to be as good to other people as we can and above all else, believing in who we are inside. You're no exception to that. Search the good of your heart. You can do anything by just putting your very soul into it and trying hard. It doesn't usually work the first time but eventually it works out. Not giving up and trying consistintly is the key. Meanwhile keep venting your feeling through youre writing because you do it well. Letting your emotions come out is the first step towards a brighter day.
Brian
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