blue is more than a colour
it brings a message of pain
the blues of singing in torture
and the blues of crying in the rain
but blue can also be happy
like the sky on a day anew
like the colours of a masterpiece
the thoughts inspired by blue
A contest entry
- The colors of our world by PonyPride.
900 points, ended May 15, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1807 entries
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Comments
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You're blue, you're whatever the song says, your're a blue, you're a blue, you're whatever the song says XD
Couldn't help it. This is what yin-yang is all about. Life and death. Happyness and sorrow. Joy and pain. Very nice job.
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Excellent
Oh, wonderful rhythm and thought process, I love where you took this color.
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very cute and yet meaningful.. thanks for following my rules
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I LOVE IT. IT IS WONDERFUL AND SO TRUE TOO. GREAT WRITING HERE. WELL DONE. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.
LOVE
WAYNE LEON
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