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Sadness (Hay(na)ku)

Sighs
And cries
Lows never highs

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Prompt 5.Sadness.

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  • Fallen Grace silver member
    May 10, 2008

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    Short, sweet, simple but powerful. I really like this, the simplicity of it combined with the emotion is amazing.

    Thanks for entering and Good luck in my contest!

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