Malignant breezes awaken malicious desires,
sultry scavengers scout sable surroundings...
Darkness beckons through amber fires,
violet eyes glinting in the undergrowth.
Figures of black emerging from the Darkness of the abyss,
grim smiles as fangs extend wanting bloods sweet bliss
Denying the urges will never prevail.
The lust overwhelms me; the wind in a sail...
...locking on target, my prey in my sight,
his bloody nectar pumping, oh what a delight -
Feasting on lust and adrenalin boosts,
I ravage his dwindling life...
as he moans in prolonged pain,
I watch him fading into oblivion... .
When hes dead, ill hide the body,
then ill return home with my hands all bloody,
I wonder how many I have killed now.
He deserved to be reserved
for a finer day.
So I returned and preserved,
some of that supple, tender flesh...
Blood stored for any other
occasion, which I
look forward to.
I smile my sly and wicked
grin.
Anticipating yet another kill...
Author notes
A poem concocted in the Devourers of Darkness, by Lady Dementia, Lost Vampyre Angel and Myself. Segmented into each individual's sections, gramatically edited, and otherwise unmodified.
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Wow, I don't remember this one! Still rocks tho...so pleased you post them all and they don't just get lost in space
Whahooo, we're awesome! 
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i love it!
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ooh this is good,
the poem looks great now its all together,
hehe and the fontand things make it look awesome,
cant wait for the next one :]
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