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Sweetness Bleeds

Red, Green, White
Your sweetness bleeds,
Oh, what a sight!

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  • crazymomma
    May 11, 2008
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    Short and sweet. I like the metaphore.


  • broken-colours
    May 10, 2008

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    This is very concise and cute. Love the metaphor of sweetness bleeding.. definitely suits the prompt I gave. Thanks for entering!