we ponder the words
written on petals
in the morning sun,
within rays
of the moon
the engraved
offer restitution
for those that deliberate,
this joy of Orchard's sparkle
bringing delight
to the hungry
feeding them
with morsels, of Wisdom
In a list
A contest entry
- but wise words endure... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended May 23, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Dear PrabhuDayal
your gold is much appreciated, and once again thank you for a wonderful contest. I so love them. Frans -
Very sweet, simple and refreshing. I was left feeling very good. Quite like a breath of Lilac through the air!
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Though quite simple yet quite profound immagery and the impact..well done my friend..and my thanks for sharing it....
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Love is an open book ...
written upon creation ... given to us with sip and with glimpse and sound ... and we, in small moments of mercy, taste and see and hear ... that which we share with others who are needy ...
Wondrous poem Frans, linked with sentiments and words of alliteration.
Myra
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