Oh God
despite countless requisitions
abundant groans
and numerous posts delivered to you
I find a pin drop silence
as a response from you
though this makes me optimistic
since every atom around is dovetailed as cool
to make you operate your next step
eventual towards me
Oh God....
Author notes
Prompt...
QUOTE : "No trumpets sound when the important decisions of our life are made. Destiny is made known silently."
A contest entry
- PICTURE PROMPT + QUOTE PROMPT by Zoe2007.
525 points, ended May 11, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Outstanding
This is a spiritual poem that finds strength in silence. Sometimes we must wait for God to answer our questions and requests. It requires patience and faith. Best of luck in the contest.
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The delicious stillness in this write is exquisite, my friend (every atom dovetailed as cool)...You have touched lightly and brought forth the invisible ...Love this one! Peace and very best of luck in the contest. Rhonda
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Really interesting how you got that quote and made a poem like this in it ..... Interesting . Like the picture to . Good luck
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You have
presented both yearning and knowing my friend. God always answers prayers. I have so experienced this in this past week. I stand in awe that he listens to my heart. Your poem of 'no trumpets' and destiny's silent moment touches my heart - its soft, but profound wording interacts with the reader. Thank you and bless you. Frans
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