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Not Just Another Simple Sugar Fix

Gone,
Released from sugary casings
Transfused directly to my bloodstream

A contest entry

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 26, 2008
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    lol!

    this was cute! short, simple and pretty cute! keep writing! >.<


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    Haha - Great Job


  • broken-colours
    May 9, 2008

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    This made me giggle a bit, was it supposed to do that? Love the feeling right after consuming sugar and you can almost feel it coursing through your veins. Nice job!


    • The-Choke
      May 9, 2008
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      Sortof

      Yes and no I guess. I was kinda trying to make it seem more serious than a feeling that simple(hence the name), but really when you think about it that's all eating cake really is. So you kinda caught me in a question that I was asking myself as well. Interesting prompt, it made me think for awhile despite it being so short of an entry. Thanks for the comment.