In the alluring embrace
of moon's magnificence
I bathe blissful
Captivated by celestial
carnality
I surrender to my
sensual splendour
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 20 words
Artist credit:
Anqet, Goddess of the Nile by *ThornErose
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/20 by Aurora Ceres.
900 points, ended May 10, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So do I but always on my own...lol
Should have been gold!
Simon -
Wow
wonderful....a trophy so well deserved.....beautiful imagery...
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I just had to ask the mother was one of the words meant, too early in the morning for me to think
But its great, such depth, congrats on the shiny =] x
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Lovely write with a very sensual flavour.....congrats on the trophy
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Celestial Carnality .... nice turn of image and alliteration. Opens of vista of swooping images, and makes us take in a sharp breath ... or maybe take a cold shower?
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Hey, can I be a part of that?? lol.
You go girl.
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Jackie,congrats on the bronze
Love the way you surrended.
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Very nicely done. Quite fitting with the pic and sensual, indeed. Loved this:
"Captivated by celestial
carnality"
Congrats on the bronze.....
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Loved it, especially the moon's embrace and your surrender.
Congratulations on bronze.
Marlene -
Grats On The Bronze!!!!!
A very vivid and fresh sensual piece you have created. Loved the flow of this. Seemed to just pour off the page. Great use of alliteration throughout. nicely done!!
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Ah yes totally beautiful
Just to think that when we do meditations that we can actually have that place to surrender in! This was very calming.
Congrats on the bronze!
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Who wouldn't?
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Aww! this is beautiful. I love the sensual write. You have written this perfectly for the prompt. Congrats on the Bronze!
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Enchanting my dear...and congrats on the bronze!
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Beautiful
celestial carnality - I love it. Wonderfully written.
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WOW yes hun this brilliant, the flow of beautiful words that
fit so well the image
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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excellent
What a great take on the picture. So very well done. Congrats on the bronze.
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Congrats on the bronze!
Enchanting words you've penned here. Lovely take on the picture. Again such smooth flow and alliteration, gorgeous to read. Congrats on the bronze
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Very smooth and sensual... a worthy trophy winner indeed!
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Love the alliteration...the last four lines are exquisite! Lovely! Thank you for your entry. Just a friendly reminder to please give artist credit in your AN.
Ash
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omg omg...ur so going to win lol
this is just amazingly beautiful SiS
Love U
Good luck
Cin
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beautiful, i think this is what i was going for but couldn't get out lol. well done, hope you get a shiney
Tasha
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This entire poem is alluring...! Haha. I love your pseudo-alliteration (e.g. 'moon's magnificence' 'sensual splendour') and your easy and effortless flow. There's nothing stilted or awkward about your poetry...do you know how insanely rare that is?
Anyways, my favorite line would have to be the uno-worded "carnality"...Gosh, what does that mean anyways? LoL I'm gonna dictionary.com/ it
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I like yours a lot hahaha can't touch yours hahaha lol
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Aww thanks...
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Ooh.. this was really nice!!! I really liked this sis!! you always do so great with prompts like these!! well done! best of luck!!
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Jackie
just maybe why your are the honest number o nAP
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celestial carnality = v e r y nice
Good work sis!
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lol.. wasn't even sure if that made sense
Thanks bro!
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Course it did... when I read that I thought, "Bliss of sensual rapture" But then I am always thinking that way. lol
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I'm waiting!!!!
lol
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