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Angel in the Clouds

Angel in the Clouds

Guide me to where you are
High above the clouds
An eternal resting place
With no sorrow to be told
When my world becomes
cold and black
Just a single glance towards
That bright sun and clouds
Sends a ray of colors through
My very tormented heart
I plant a flower everyday
As a token of my affection
You left my heart in your
hands
That day you had to go away
Never stop thinking of
Memories that are rooted in
my brain
Like vines they grow and grow
Trapping me in your sheltered past
Alas I am not sad
Do not think I am crying now
Only a smile upon my face knowing
your safe
I shall see you once again
Paradise calls to each soul in
the end
For now I shall paint a picture
Of memories we shared
Just continue to chase away
the rain
With the brightness of your smile
Forever etched in the clouds
Looking down on me
My angel amongst the clouds

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    Lovely concept and creativity, this is another piece that may well explain the thought processes in the artists mind prior to creating the image prompt in the first place. well done and bet wishes.