I am in pain
I am crying
I am sorry
I am pathetic to the point where
I am hugging a stuffed bunny
For comfort and warmth
I am selfish
I am an idiot
I am stuck in a lonely, little box
I want a hug
I want you to give me a hug
Give me a hug.
Hmph.
I am cold
I feel pretty
I stopped crying
And now this poem can be over
And I'm not going to end it with
"Let me die"
Like I was planning to,
Because I feel loved.
Author notes
The "Let me die" was metaphorical.
Just for those of you who are a little bit worried about me.
If you're wondering why this poem goes from happy to sad, it's because I was sad when I started writing this, then when I wrote the "I want a hug part" I blushed a little, and so that made me happy lol.
This is all true. Don't argue with that.
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Give me a hug. grr.
What do you think?
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hahaha *hugs*
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*hug*
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great
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*Hug* Great write Mei, read my last poem. it'll make you feel better I guess. IM me later.
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i like... pls check out some of mine
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Poor Heart... Remember that you are always loved. I love how you can put your emotions into a poem like this. Its amazing that you were brave enough to post this on the web! Great job!
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Quite emotional I must say but honest and truthful nonetheless. What was it you did, Merideth? I'm here if you need someone to talk to. Meanwhile thanks for sharing this poem. It's good.
Brian
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