I can see the seed of love
The beginning of blossoms
with their dulcet aroma
Looking in your eyes.
As I gaze at your treasure
that is your sensual body
taking you into my arms.
This much from a look.
To come and taste your soft lips,
savor the wine of your love.
To become your sole passion
I’ve no other choice.
In a list
A contest entry
- QUICKIEI!!!!! by Cherokee.
900 points, ended May 11, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Also, more show,less tell.
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It needs some work. Tighten it up. Try not to punctuate because the punctuation in this makes no sense and try to think of ways to say what you are saying without being cliche about it. New ways to say it are what I am looking for. Still, some lovely imagery here. Thank you for entering.
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