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Sinking

This feeling has returned
Sinking deep within
Telling me that I don't matter
That the demons will always win

I try to hold a smile
And keep it on my face
But no matter how hard I try
I'm always in second place

I will never compare to her
That I should have known
But I will continue to fight this battle
Wether your here or I'm alone

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  • Antebellum
    July 20

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    Wether your here or I'm alone

    wonderful ending,..I think there should be a 'h' in 'whether' not sure though
    thanks for entering.


  • toomysterious
    June 25, 2008
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    Sad but heartfelt. Congratulations on the Bronze.