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An Attempted Conquest

A flicker of a frown crosses my face
A tease from sorrow
An attempted conquest
A sorrowful need to conquer
Answers to questions I can not find
Problems causing pain
Both yours and mine

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Ok well this isn't one of my best but I'm entering it anyway...any advice on how to improve it is welcomed....
~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~


Option 5

A contest entry

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