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miss you

everytime I get
so tired
of trying to catch
a sliver of your smile.
I close my eyes

and in that moment
I see us
dancing in the rain
with happiness
we never really experienced
before

but I don't want
to close my eyes
and see
a picture of us
like polaroid memories
in damp cotton plants

for each time I wake
reality hits hard
and I still miss you

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 15, 2008

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    I can relate in so many ways with this, as to me it's the ringing of my heart... it's how it goes for me. I think of my ex and I love thinking of the good times in a way, or the times I wanted...but then I wake up and realise it'll never be anymore and I'm being foolish and the tears begin.