Two lovers both with eyes of blue,
with a love that is so new.
What started with a Master and slave,
grew stronger and stronger each day.
His discipline sometimes brings me tears.
My Master, Lover I shall never fear.
His soft kisses dries the tears from my eyes,
as the heated passion between us flies.
Two lovers both with eyes of blue,
a kiss in the night and I love you.
Author notes
The beautiful relationship between a Master and His slave.
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Comments
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A cute poem - thanks and good luck!
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This was a wonderful poem..
The imagery and emotions in it were just so vivid..
And heartfelt.. You did a great job here..
Thanks for sharing..
And best of luck..
Angel
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Thank you Angel for your sweet words. My emotions are very true in this piece as i love Master very much.
Thanks again.
Cheryl
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is not a subject that I enjoy reading, but the poem is very well written.
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Thank you Pollycheck
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butiful crafty ...
xxx cheeky xxx
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