Stately mountains loom as icy giants
with wistful snow drifts
molting into a lazy painted sky.
They stand holy above.
Below, trees branch evergreen.
Then a stone-still lake
photographs
an upside down clone
of the picturesque scene,
all perfect as God is the
awesome artist of creativity.
Author notes
I chose the picture: grand teton-reflections-yellowstone.
A contest entry
- Reflections by Folklor.
461 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 2008, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'd like some feedback.
Comments
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Nice!
Good luck in my contest!
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I really liked this..
You did a really good job on the prompt I think..
The imagery was really nice and peaceful..
You really showed your talent as a poet here..
best of luck..
Angel
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i can see that you really looked at the picture prompts becasue even before i read your Authyors notes I could picture the photo I left staright away.
I like your imagery at the beginning with the painting the'lazy sky'
and the mountains as 'icy giants'
the colours you represented were well painted
a beautiful write
well done.
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