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The Words I have to Say

I turn my head away
As he tries to look into my eyes
And my throat tightens up with the words I have to say
What I would not give for a brand new day
I reach out and grab him as he turns away and sighs

He knows what I'm about to do
His angry yet pleading eyes confirm it
this WOULDN'T HAVE TO HAPPEN IF HE WOULD'VE STAYED TRUE
when HE tries TO SPEAK i TAKE IT AS MY CUE
"just SIT DOWN AND LET ME TALK BEFORE YOU THROW A FIT"

"i KNOW i FORGAVE YOU BUT i CHANGED MY MIND
the PAIN YOU INFLICTED IS STILL WITHIN ME
The fact that you cheated is something I can't put behind
I bet now you wish you could go back and push rewind
Can't you stop trying and just let me be?"

"Don't grab my hand and ask to be friends
And don't make the mistake of thinking I want you to stay
I need to be alone and let my heart slowly mend
Adieu, goodbye forever, this is the end
Just turn around, go out the door, and walk away

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So I wrote this when I found out my boyfriend cheated on me

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  • poetboi
    May 11
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    there are a few lines in here which to me sound a bit off, but this is a really great poem. I think that you firstly need to remove the variation between caps and no caps. Line 10 to me feels slightly out of place too, but over all, i think that this is a great poem