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I Am

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Acknowledge, exist, be,

no more, no less.

Free your thoughts

let your mind rest.

 

Notice all creation

merge, connect.

Be the peace in nature,

see the cause and effect.

 

No future, no past,

just be.

embrace and except

soar free...

 

Breathe in the moment

in glory and peace.

Hold!

release.

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    June 22, 2008
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    Worthy!

    So glad you won a trophy for this! It's so lovely. Nice timing & rhyming as usual. Sounds like you've been practicing your cleansing breaths :

    Breathe in the moment
    in glory and peace.
    Hold!
    release.

    Nice write!


  • echo-ink
    June 11, 2008
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    Yet another hand clapper, sissy! claps................

    forever and ever.....................


  • Captivated Lioness gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Centering poem...

    Yes! Like those moments standing upon the earth looking out at a vista feeling we are the earth. A very meditative poem and I enjoyed it! Blessings, J.


  • my.stars.dont.shine
    May 18, 2008
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    woah, this is great. i love the 4th stanza. thanks for entering and good luck!


  • princehusayn
    May 15, 2008
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    excellent teaching

    This write is on time because we are out of breath doing all kinds of trivial things tired from foolish actions some one needs and has taught us how to breathe again release again ease again. This write will bring peace to a reader who gave up looking for a tylenol and searched within. Thank you for sharing Peace and Love soul.... princehusayn

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    May 12, 2008
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    Hello Pisces Rainbow. I do agree with what you are saying. To take soveriegn control of once's self in the here and now, to now what a person is living, doing, being right now in each moment. And to let the timeless one come forward, and to be rid of the fears of the future and the guilt of the past. Great stuff. Regards.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    May 11, 2008

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    Breathe Deeply!

    Yes, this is a wonderful poem & a reminder of what I need to do right now! I need a deep breath in Him & to rest in His peace. This is so timely for me to read as I'm going thru a med change that's very unsettling. I'm rushing about as much as I can 'cause I feel so behind & overwhelmed with all I've got to do & I think I can do the tasks of 10 people! Thanks for writing this lovely piece that reminds one to be "in the moment" in awareness of the life about & to be "still" & know that He is Yah! HalleluYah...what a refreshing!


  • aliceramone
    May 10, 2008

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    a good positive piece...serene and great on the prompt...well done...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    May 10, 2008

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    auntieee i miss your precious writes i miss you toooo
    so badd auntie this write is awesomee i loved it a lot its just awesome


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 10, 2008
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    Perfectly expressed!
    Bravo!!!!

    Those who do not treasure each moment
    will ultimately see life pass them by.

    (Smiling, for since American Idol two weeks ago,
    Neil Diamond's "I am, I said" has been circling
    relentlessly in my head!!)

    Good to see you back!

    Aesthete


  • Olivias Violin
    May 9, 2008
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    "No future, no past, just be." - Great!


    • Pisces rainbow gold member
      May 10, 2008
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      thank you my friend, how have you been it has been a while and I really MISSED AP.

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