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Somedays

How did this mole hill
  escalate to become the biggest mountain

that I had ever seen?

I'm left wondering,
  Do I ever do anything right?

Author notes

Oo.... I don't like this. I started out feeling humorous about the prompt, and then killed it.

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  • z etoile
    May 14, 2008
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    Well its good for a quickie


  • Hope Angel silver member
    May 9, 2008

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    I like this. It's very thought provocking, and I think that we all think those thoughts often. I really like this take on the prompt. This is going to be difficult to judge. Thanks for entering


  • Angelflower
    May 9, 2008

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    aww.. you didn't kill it..
    You did a good job with the prompt!
    I did really like this!!
    Best of luck hun..

    Angel