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Whispers in the dark

I love you i say in the darkness,
with voices that barely appear,

if i had one more minute

i would spend it with you right here,

but your voice is lost in the darkness,

and the light comes into view,

then im faced with the dark reality,

that i dont have more time with you.

Author notes

I wrote this right after my girlfriend dumped me too go out wiht some popular guy!

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  • xxUnSpokenxx
    May 9, 2008

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    Emotion

    Its full emotion, and you can feel that you miss her. Im sorry. But on the other hand this poem was so good.


  • Fallen Grace silver member
    May 9, 2008

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    Beautiful
    It's full of love with a hint of sadness
    I like this poem, its a great write

    Good luck =]

    - ♥
    Beautifully-Bound