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You Light My Day





I love the way you light  my day
and make sensational my morn
Without you dear death would come near
and my mornings would be forlorn

You fill the night with sensual delight
I love the touch of your soft skin
We lick and groan nibble and moan
in wonderful and sultry sin

With every kiss I feel your bliss
I ‘m lost in sensations of you
Your sweet love is from heaven above
and is as pure as morning dew.








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  • craftyangel43
    May 31
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    Very beautifully written piece with so much love, feelings, and passion. As I love the whole poem the last line has to be my favorite (Your sweet love is from heaven above and is as pure as morning dew.) That is such a beautiful line.Good luck in the contest.

    Cheryl


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    May 14

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    BEAUTIFUL

    Hello Dear Poet,
    I have just finished reading this poem and wish to let you know just how much I have enjoyed the read.You have penned a beautiful piece here.It has blown me away.It is filled with so much love and devotion.The reader can 'feel' these emotions that you have woven within your words.The visuals within the write also play a major part of being a great poem to read.Your words are soft and so tender, just like the way a love poem should be written.Your words are full of description and awesome visulization.I tried to pinpoint some lines that stood out the most for me, what reached out and pulled me into your tapestry of woven words, I re-read you, and still I couldn't decide, as I adore the whole poem.You have an incredible way with words.You have been a pleasure to read my friend.

    Take care and many beautiful blessings to you.
    ~Angel~


  • crazymomma
    May 10

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    I love poems that anyone can connect with and this is one of them. The imagery was so nice and it flowed like a gentle stream.


  • Angel of Dreams gold member
    May 9

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    Very pasionate, The flow is really smooth and the rhyming is wonderful!
    I really love this poem =]

    Good luck in the contest!

    - ♥
    Beautifully-Bound
  • logan321
    May 9
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    wow

    Very sweet and powerful
    simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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